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[Emily]: 252.Explicit Erotica.He Wore a Mask
Rating: 0.40 Uploaded by: Created: 2011-04-28 11:22:07 Keywords: erotica mask night creative mysteryGenre:ComedyStyle:short storyLicense:Free for readingType: Short Story; Erotica
Date: Unknown
Progress: Complete
If you don't like erotica, don't read this piece.
If you are offended by erotica, don't read this piece.
If you don't like sex or reading about sex, don't read this piece.
If you don't like parties, orgies, or people with large libidos, don't read this piece.
Please don't do as members from the past used to and rate (lowly) based on the fact that it IS erotica. No writer here appreciates someone judging a piece without even reading it.
2005-12-31 Kuzco: Heh, nice! A wizard making love to a princess in a mystery room. Good idea and well developed. I thought the descriptions were fascinating; it wasn't the first time I read an erotic piece so I have a limited room to compare.
The descriptions were well written but you didn’t hang around on a subject for too long, as so many others would, I thought the set up you created, the costume ball successfully transfers to the reader. At least it happened with me. The personality of the princess is also well “worked” if you know what I mean.
I don’t think there’s something to add here, it’s a well thought out and developed erotic setting. Good work.
2005-12-31 Emily: Ah, thank you! I always wanted to write about a masquerade, and this was FINALLY my chance. Balls are fun! I also wanted to write about a woman with dark skin -- most of my female characters are white, and usually pale.
I needed a change!
2006-01-01 Kuzco: And you prooved to be quite able in such new topics, I think.
2006-01-30 Po: I've gotten about a third of the way through, but because of the time of night, became far too tired to read more. I plan to come back and finish this though. Your description is very lush, like dark chocolate melting on the tongue. :D
2006-01-30 Emily: Mm... chocolate...
2006-08-25 Burning Inside: Wow.....that wstory was great, i mean like brilliance, and the masquerade, I loved it. Although I would have to say ust descriptive wise I'd have to like the entire beginning, and the end part with the dream. I dont know why but those just caught my eye. I'll rate it in one second
2006-08-25 Burning Inside: u got an 8
2006-08-30 Veltzeh: Well, Open Office didn't complain, so I read this one! And then I'm at a loss for words, as usual...
Well, let's see, it was good to read but I don't identify with the characters (which is probably very predictable, actually). It's general enough to grasp otherwise, though. (But you know, I did read a description of vore once, and while it was very weird and mostly non-erotic to me, I actually got it. XD) I was at a bit of a loss with all the descriptions, but they weren't too hard. :) It's probably just me not being used to them.
Call me a science geek, but I was a bit confused at the lack of analysis and reasoning, heh! Then again, if it is light erotica, it's not like those are needed, heh.
Another, (evidently) very personal thing was that the genders bothered me... but that happens when I continuously do gender-neutral stuff.